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    sexyfunkymonkie Guest Spider. Just visiting.

    Default Haiku, anyone?

    Inhale the daylight.
    Speak the language of the sun.
    Let energy from stars sustain you.
    Open your leaves to their light.
    Breathe these ancient gods.

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    Gawain_VIII Guest Spider. Just visiting.

    Smoke Break

    A proper haiku is more than just a 3-line poem divided into 5-7-5 syllables. The Japanese art form actually has several requirements:
    1) The number of syllables (actually 'moras', which are equivelant to, but not the same as, a syllable) is only the first.
    2) A proper haiku should also contain a seasonal reference (kigo),
    3) and a cutting word (kireji) which gives more depth to the work and accents an emotional spark.
    4) Lastly, a true haiku is supposed to compare two dissimilar things.

    My submission: SMOKE BREAK
    Inhale, long deep breaths.
    Sitting on the new-born grass
    contemplating God.
    Last edited by Gawain_VIII; 07-04-2013 at 03:49 AM. Reason: formatting

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    Dryadalisk Guest Spider. Just visiting.

    Default haiku

    This is Insanity

    concrete room, restrain

    Calming me, such gental snow

    my mind..it fades......away

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